Soundtrack Design Feedback Please!

Hi im new to the fourm and im working on a soundtrack design project at the moment for my uni degree. The film maker is a guy a called Max Schleser and he is making a experimental film from footage he recorded in Japan. I have compeleted the sound for one section using field recordings he made in Japan and my own sound design, im needing some feedback for my project write up so please take a look here and leave me any critical comments on the soundtrack design -

any opinions appreciated!