Screenplay Challenges - Let's make some papers dirty

Hi all,

I am an amateur scriptwriter who is not able to continue writing in his native language anymore because of the conditions in his country. Hence, I opened a website to keep writing in English and apply for contests all around the world. Yet, you know, maintaining motivation is really hard when you are just on your own.

Sorry for prolonging this but would you please look at the link below and give feedback?

Still making little changes but I really need your feedback to go on.

Thanks a lot.