New Student Filmmaker's Movie

Goldiney

New member
Hi, I'm pretty new to the filmmaking scene... I joined a beginning college course last semester, in which we created 3 group movies. One of ours, called Brother In Arms, I'm especially proud of. I was wondering if anyone from an objective standpoint can critique the movie? Now please keep in mind, this was our VERY first project and we had a very limited amount of time to do it. If anyone is interested in offering suggestions, comments, or praise, it would be greatly appreciated. The movie is in two parts, due to the size of the file. I will supply both links for those of you who wouldn't mind taking a look... it's only 7:25 :)

PART ONE:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H9ZhuI1zH0w
PART TWO:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6AIeSPGiZOA

THANK YOU!
 
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