My first ever short film, SPOILER its not great!

bhunterism

New member
So I managed to organise myself into making my first short film. It took around 13 hours to write, shoot and edit for this first rough video.
I plan to reshoot some parts of it and cut one of the sequences down but I would like for you to comment and help me out. We all started somewhere! :)

I present to you, RELIC.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCSDqliRwBg



p.s. My editing skills are lacking but I quite like it.
 

Kim Welch

Senior Member
Staff member
Hi B, Welcome to the forums. It's not bad at all. has some really good stuff in it. The fall and kill could use a little work with the blood spurting. The chase was a bit long and the direction the evil thing was going didn't seem to be the same path the explorer was on. Was that you? I like the beginning and the very end after the blood spurts.
 
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