My name is Asher Pike, I’m very thankful for being accepted into this site. I hope to become friends with people here, to give and gain advice. I am an aspiring film director, novel writer, musical composer and editor. Just 16 as well so I really appreciate all advice and feedback on my work from other people. Here is my first real short film that took me 2 years to make, trial and error. It’s a 20 minute fantasy film that I wrote, acted, edited, shot and composed etc. I’ve tried to make it in the style of a slow grind with an emotional and deep twist at the end. I’d love your feedback, tips, advice and honesty. Also if any of you want me to watch and review your film on youtube with a comment and like just ask .