BLOOD ORANGE - my new short film in winter magic film festival

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danielevioli

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kinda cool! i really liked the idea and the story but i personally would have liked it different! i think you could have done it without words: i personally dislike too much dialogue. i like dialogue to be subtext, supplement. i like actions to speak, cinema is images.
hence i don't think you necessarily need them to express what they think. if we didn't know what people were thinking... you could handle it a little differently and the audience wouldn't be sure themselves whether one of the two were actually the killer or not: good premise for some fun. then the ending would come more to a surprise as well.
i like the orange shirt joke and the subtle irony that ends with the not-so-subtle blood splatter. cool film!
 
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