Animated Club Visuals Feedback?

Hey Guys!
So I’m studying Media Production at College, and one of the units of work we are doing is 2D animation. What we had to do is create a variety of visuals (like what would be seen at a club or a music gig) then using our own and other people’s visuals edit it to a music track. I was wondering if you guys would mind taking a look and giving me some feedback on it?

WARNING FLASHING IMAGES!!!

<object width="640" height="385"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/BP9dtW-umNQ?fs=1&hl=en_US&rel=0"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/BP9dtW-umNQ?fs=1&hl=en_US&rel=0" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="640" height="385"></embed></object>

1. What did you think of the video as a whole?

2. Was there any parts you felt bored at, if so please specify?

3. Was there any parts that stood out to you and why was this?

4. What do you think I could improve on?

5. What did you think of the editing?

6. Do you think this video fits the style that would be played at a club, why or why not?

7. What would you rate the video out of 10? (0 being terrible, 10 being brilliant)

Thanks for your time
Mike
 

Kim Welch

Senior Member
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Interesting

Interesting

It was interesting while thinking of it as something for a dance club. not great for web entertainment.
 
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