Advice om short film idea?


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I am making a 5 min short film, and this is an idea i had:

- Guy in a red shirt a green cap is driving along at night
- Another guy in a similar red shirt and green cap with a white duffle bag is hitch-hiking
- Man in car picks up hitchiker
- Man driving car turns on radio
- Menwhile hithicker notices duffle bag in back of car
- Radio: "Theirs a killer on the loose that is wearing a red shirt and green cap and a white duffle bag... ectt..."
- Men in car freak out, audience dont know which one is killer
- After moments of struggle, driver gets distracted and hits someone with his car
- they both freak out and get out car quickly
- the person they hit is a girl in a red shirt green cap and with a white duffle bag with a body in it

WAT DO U THINK, please give me advice

Kim Welch

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I want to see this as a motion picture

I want to see this as a motion picture

please get the green light and when it is done upload it here so we can watch it.

Bob Kessler

New member
There are millions of great ideas out there. It all comes down to execution.

Preproduce the hell out of it; a "moving vehicle" project has many unique problems.

Good luck!


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Like the other reply mentioned, its all about your execution of a particular film or video production.

Based on what you described, my perception is that it will be a suspense/thriller film. However, that is up to you. It could also work well as a horror and maybe even a comedy depending on how you want it to play out. I would definitely watch it though.

Nice concept!
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